there are some english problems.....let me reform: have you ever felt so sad that you think that you'll never laugh again? (if you say more laugh it can mean that your laughing allready....if you understand what I mean) Have you ever felt so empty that you think you'll never feel something again? ok....there are many posibilitis to reform those two sentences.....but still you should change it.....I really like the idea...."have you ever felt like a candle in the wind? I have..." simply beautiful! can't wait for more (hope you're not angry at me cause of the critics........I just want to help......)
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thank you dear ehy, what are you saying? how could I be angry x your help? I'll change the pic as soon as I can^^ thank you again! (aaaarghhh!!! I'm starting hate english!)
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thank you again!
(aaaarghhh!!! I'm starting hate english!)
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